in the shadow awaits a desire

It's been a while since I played Tybalt so any crit is welcome. I'm kind of taking him from a weird time. Most people will be more familiar with Tybalt's angrier personality as shown throughout the series, but since I'm taking him post-series I'll be trying to balance how he was and how he probably turned out afterward.

So please, do not hesitate to say anything I'm doing wrong or doing right or any thoughts you might have about him. Everything will be appreciated.

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